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Yes!

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Very good

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But other than that so far I am enjoying the V.N. as it has a story to it been reading none stop since this morning !!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Hi hope you don't mind feedback but I just noticed a ERROR in the swimming pool scene, where the main guy ( NAMED ) is in the pool face down in the water and the camera so to speak looking up towards the roof, the shot is the wrong way around him arm, belly and shorts should be water ccoloured and and arm in air should be normal skin colorbut it's the other way around  !!! I tuck a screen cap to show what I mean !!!

Mr GaTeZ.

Ahh, my bad. Will fix!

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Just finished this update and I gotta say I LOVE IT! Really good job on making the characters diverse and lovable. The story was really fun and intriguing as well. Looking forward to the next update!

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